desire is a mirage
which makes us blind
its different for all age
imagination of our mind
desire is a dream
which isn't complete
no one can see your dream
nor can make it complete
desire is like crave
so keep strong ur hopes
desire is all about we rave
which makes us walk on rope
desires can be wild
it can be tame
my efforts can be mild
for all of us its d same
desire can be a man
can also be a thing
desires can give u a tan
if u want to acheive something
too good, rhyme scheme is consistent allover except few places
ReplyDeletethe feeling is awesum
btw m karan B-)
ReplyDeletethnxx karan
ReplyDeletegreat sil i never know u write this good, then for ur poems, ur story falls back miles, u need to improve in stories.. btwn, this is straight awesome poem :) i luv its meaning :)
ReplyDeleten the way of using words..
ReplyDeleten the rhyming too..
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